Ivy Levan - Frostbitten

[Main Pop Girl]

Just wondering if y'all could give me some feedback on this cover? I feel it's missing a little something but I'm not 100% sure what I could do to improve it.  

[Woodcrest]

The immediate issue for me is the use of space, she needs to fill the space more for this to work better compositionally. Alternatively make the background smaller and crop it down. I like the concept and colouring though!

[Baby V Alex]

I think she is to bright for her surroundings, but love the concept.

[Main Pop Girl]

20 hours ago, Woodcrest said:

The immediate issue for me is the use of space, she needs to fill the space more for this to work better compositionally. Alternatively make the background smaller and crop it down. I like the concept and colouring though!

8 hours ago, Baby V Alex said:

I think she is to bright for her surroundings, but love the concept.

Thank you for your opinions guys!  I made a second version with a smaller background and a darker picture of her. Does it look any better or do you think it still needs more work?

[Third Eye]

1 hour ago, Countess said:

Thank you for your opinions guys!  I made a second version with a smaller background and a darker picture of her. Does it look any better or do you think it still needs more work?

I like that version more thank the other because in the other she was too bright, but she looks great in the second one!  

[Main Pop Girl]

19 hours ago, ART DECO said:

I like that version more thank the other because in the other she was too bright, but she looks great in the second one!  

Thank you boo!  I appreciate that!