Tweener Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 (edited) . Edited December 1, 2022 by Tweener 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOVE Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 (edited) I was thinking about creating such a thread but I'm too shy for that I need help with his poem: https://instaud.io/3qYO That's what I got: Love was like a dream I've never ?thought was real? Promising joy I've never thought I'd feel Now you're here with me and I know that you're mine And I'll be loving you until the end of time When all the ?...? run dry My love, when stars no longer shine I'll still be loving you until the end of time I don't know the places where the "??" are. Sombody help!! Edited March 17, 2019 by Amethyst Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tweener Posted March 17, 2019 Author Share Posted March 17, 2019 when all the fears run dry? Does it make any sense? I would say tears maybe, but he says it so awkwardly. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whoknowsmehere Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 In my mind this is how I see this poem written. I could be wrong as each poet has their own unique style of writing. Punctuation is not always necessary depending on the style of the poem. Love was like a dream I never thought was a real Promising joy I never thought id feel Now you're here with me And I know that you're mine And I'll be loving you Until the end of time When all the seas run dry, my Love And the Stars no longer shine I'll still be Loving you Until, the end of time 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whoknowsmehere Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 I do think "Love is" would have been better than saying "love was". And I would have said "And I know that you are mine" instead of "you're mine". But that's just my style of writing poetry I am not just a pretty face. I have written my fair share of poetry in my day. I used to belong to a poetry forum years ago. I even won a few contests they had on there from time to time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOVE Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 35 minutes ago, Whoknowsmehere said: In my mind this is how I see this poem written. I could be wrong as each poet has their own unique style of writing. Punctuation is not always necessary depending on the style of the poem. Love was like a dream I never thought was a real Promising joy I never thought id feel Now you're here with me And I know that you're mine And I'll be loving you Until the end of time When all the seas run dry, my Love And the Stars no longer shine I'll still be Loving you Until, the end of time SEAS! EXACTLY! Thank you for your help And maybe make a poetry thread where you could share your poems? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cypher Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 There's one very specific repeated background word that I can't figure out from Taylor Swift - Holy Ground @1:45. "something something your love" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whoknowsmehere Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 Underneath the Sycamore tree, I behold A flying squirrel darting to and fro Carrying upon his hairy little back A little green creature, known as a Toad. Unsure of what it is that I see I take a more detailed look Surprised as I am beyond any realistic belief That little green toad is staring directly at me There seems no escape from this weird and crazy place They get closer and closer with nowhere to run And just as the nightmare is coming to an end That little green toad reaches out, and licks me in the face. I wake from my slumber and no Squirrel or Toad Not sure where I am I scramble to get up Only to realize too much Whiskey and Wine You may wake up with your head in the Comode. The End. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tweener Posted March 17, 2019 Author Share Posted March 17, 2019 16 minutes ago, Cypher said: There's one very specific repeated background word that I can't figure out from Taylor Swift - Holy Ground @1:45. "something something your love" go away with your love? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whoknowsmehere Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 15 minutes ago, Cypher said: There's one very specific repeated background word that I can't figure out from Taylor Swift - Holy Ground @1:45. "something something your love" Hard to tell. Almost sounds like "too late". Have to listen a number of more times though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the end Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 (edited) lmao Edited December 3, 2022 by the end Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the end Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 (edited) ok Edited December 3, 2022 by the end Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tweener Posted March 17, 2019 Author Share Posted March 17, 2019 1 hour ago, Pixie said: Great thread If someone can help me to understand the full lyrics of this snippet please : Never really looked me in the eye (?) His name was Pete (sweet Pete) The first time that he took me out He didn't know what to talk about So I took the initiative and told Pete he had to leave So I’m back to square one With Mr. good-for-nothing John Ever since he brought me down I can't get off the ground (?) at the end "it's not like I don't try..." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tweener Posted March 17, 2019 Author Share Posted March 17, 2019 1 hour ago, Pixie said: Also if someone can help me with this snippet too : Uh what's gonna happen tonight ? Uh (?) happen tonight Stay on the dancefloor Slowly between you and i And someone (?) (?) see my blue eye (?) happen For sure Stay on the dancefloor Buff tingaling, buff tingaling (told me ?) Buff tingaling (turn it up) Buff tingaling (turn it up) Uh what's gonna happen tonight? Uh what's gonna happen tonight Stays on the dancefloor Slowly between you and i And someone (?) He's only gonna see my blue eye whatever's gonna happen For sure Stay on the dancefloor Buff tingaling, buff tingaling (told me ?) Buff tingaling (turn it up) Buff tingaling (turn it up) 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tweener Posted March 17, 2019 Author Share Posted March 17, 2019 The reason I made this topic is this song The Spanish parts. I once transcribed them, but I'm not sure if they are correct She's from the ghetto, chasing dreamsShe prayed to God, then she prayed for fameShe placed their hand, the life was deadWhat she wanted was somewhere elseShe left the station, her past behindSalvation she have to findCause more is better and less is badAnd all of those dreams that we're taught to believeBut just make you feel empty and sadYou don't have to sell your soul to get involved(Te canta la vida)You don't have to lose control to get involved(hoy el clima!)Be yourself, you're better than you'll ever know(Ey y ten cuidado)You don't need to get naked or fake it to make itYou just need to get involvedShe's made it, celebrityHer longing last is no guaranteeDesigner dresses and killer heelsAll of the secrets are always revealedNow she knows just how empty it feels You don't have to sell your soul to get involved(Te canta la vida)You don't have to lose control to get involved(hoy el clima!)Be yourself, you're better than you'll ever know(Ey y ten cuidado)You don't need to get naked or fake it to make itYou just need to get involvedHarm's your showcasing, but love is your cravingI see it right there in your eyesQue linda que guapa cariña preciosaYour beauty is not your insideYou don't have to sell your soul to get involved(Te canta la vida)You don't have to lose control to get involved(hoy el clima!)Be yourself, you're better than you'll ever know(Ey y ten cuidado)You don't need to get naked or fake it to make itYou just need to get involvedYou don't have to sell your soul to get involved(Te canta la vida)You don't have to lose control to get involved(hoy el clima!)Be yourself, you're better than you'll ever know(Ey y ten cuidado)You don't need to get naked or fake it to make itYou just need to get involved Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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